1 more poem,i doubt u wil read it but at least iv got it off my chest
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dark takes over
the light is not strong enough
my life is slipping away
like sand through my fingers
my life has gone black
it surounds me
i scream
does anyone hear?
i doubt it
iv lost my pride,
and my will to live
the fight has got too much
my shoulders bare too many burdens
im giving up
getting weak
if i fell
would anyone catch me?
i might try that experiment
the windows open
it calls, and beckons to me
my hands grab the handle
my legs are on the window sill
i lift my arms up in the air
and shout "goodbye"
as i take my last breath
i lean forward
and plunge
i feel the weight lift from my shoulders
for the first time in years,
i smile
iv hit the ground
with an almighty thud
im in a better place now
my wings have sprouted out.
at my funeral,
only a few people bother
to make an appearance
rain falls from above
and washes away the tears
im sorry i had to go
but the pain proved too much
i would like to dedicate this poem to my older, 15 yr old sister who is now in hospital from tryin to commit suicide. the doctors say she will be extremely lucky to live through the next hour. i hope she makes it and doesnt become another suicicde statistic.
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