1 aaaaaaaaaa another poem by vrit

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I crawl to bed
In bed I cry
I cry myself to sleep
In my sleep I want to die
I've died within
Within I hurt
I hurt 'cause of the pain
The pain caused by u
U and many other
Many other that pretend
Pretend for the world
The world that’s full of hate
Hate is powerful
Powerful enough to take life
Life is full of lies
Lying has become part of nature
Nature can eat u alive
Alive is what I don’t want to be
What I want to be is dead
Death is all that fills my mind
My mind is full of thoughts
Thoughts of that sharp shiny tool
That sharp shiny tool can take me to heaven
Heaven is away from depression
Depression can kill
Killing is what I’m going through
What I’m going through is a phase
A phase usually passes
Passes in time
But for me time has stopped
Stopped for me to go crazy
When I go crazy is when I take the pills
The pills that make me crawl
Crawl to bed
In bed I cry
Cry myself to sleep
And in my sleep I finally die
-vrit


id really appreciate it if u guys would rate my poems.......
i wanna thank u all for whoever rated 2 of my other ones..........pleeeeeease rate my other ones too thnk u soo much

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