1 a A poem called Dying

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Hey guys i wrote this poem a couple days ago.  It's a poem to sum up emotions. Sorry if it offends u in any way. Well tell me what you think by rating it.


I sit in my room, thinking it's too late,
No where to go, and I think "but wait"

I've used the bong too much, done to many drugs,
I've been around the block, I've met the thugs.

Popped many pills, smoked so much weed,
I'm dying slowly, yes indeed.

Dying slowly, laying down now,
I really should say, one last vow.

So many vows, to family and friends,
I wish I could be there for them, to the end.

I'm going now, far, far away,
Just as the bottle, is swept away from the bay.

I close my eyes, wanting to cry,
Holding the emotions, plus the lies.

Here I go now, all the fcking lies,
You know what?  Here's one last good-bye.

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