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1 1 1 1 I never knew ..plz tell me wat you think its my first poem!!!
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I Never thought that walk that day
Would change my life in every way
I Smiled, You waved, And asked my name
At first I wasnt sure what to do
cause i never thought that I'd love you
We talked for a while and you made me smile
But I wasnt sure it would last a while
I walked back hme and looked at the fone
sumtimes i just left it alone
I thought you were like the rest
and just wanted to get me undressed
But i figured o well I'll give it a try
he did seem like a pretty nice guy
We started hangin out everytime i snuck out
but i still had my reasons of doubt
I didnt wanna let myself get to colse to you
cause i didnt kno what you really wanted to do
I didnt know how you felt about me
If it was personal
or just physicaly
And then one nite when i stopped bye
i said to myself "hey i like this guy"
YOu said you wanted to go in the back room
and i knew exaclty what you wanted to do
At first i said i dont know
cause i didnt want to let my true feelings show
But then i finally gave in
and let your feelings come on in
At first i put on a fight
but then i realized that it felt rite
and then i knew rite then and there
that id want to see you everywhere
I went home that nite with a smile
layed down and drempt or you for a while
but then you left and i did too
never knowing when id see you
Months went by and shit got worse
realizing my hearts been hurt
I still thought of you now and then
and everytime i layed in bed
Then one sweet day i got your call
and thats about when i dropped my jaw
I got the biggest smile on my face
you took me too a different place
We talked for hours on end
I loved juts listeing to you as i layed in my bed
And now ive got you
and i know its for real
and you know jus how i feel
I never wanna loose you again
cuz that was the worst 6 months there has ever been
Now we got sometihng nobody can ever have
you gave me a life that always makes me glad
I want you to know that i love you
and my feelings for you wil always be true
thank you for taking the time to read this...its the first poem i ever tryed writing about my boyfriend kevin...so if n e of u guys left a girl u cared about try everyting u can to get her number back cause thats what kevin did and i swear we have the greatest love
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