1 A (actually 2) poems writtin by me....tell me weather they are good!

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In the end...

Tear up the page
tear it GOOD
Burn up the feelings
like i should.

Scream so loud
make it memorable
shout a million words
until i tremble

Cry all night
eyes burn with tears
sing so loud
chase all the fears

Say goodbye
and mean it well
make sure everybody knows
my life was hell

Cutch the knife
clutch it GOOD
thrust behind it
that feels like it should...



Blue as the ski
as it covers with grey
feelings to stiff
they wont go away.

Anger rolls in
i cover my eyes
water pelts down
i hang my head to cry.

Stormy night
feelings forgotten
lightning strikes
mind so rotten.

Wish you were here
so i could express my pain
tear you apart
run away with the shame

The night you forgot
i will never forget
my feelings were tru
these you couldnt except

You were there
and i missed out
i wish you could see
that it is you i cannot live without

If i could go back and
change what happened
this would all be a dream
'A DREAM FORGOTTEN'

But changing the past
would not fix it all
as now i can see
nothing was to come of it
you didnt want ME at all....


I would also like to express sympothy towards the cross bow insedent in NSW not so long ago....my thoughts are with you...

Make our world a better place..think b4 u act...think b4 you wreck someones life....and most or all just THINK in the first place.
4/04/03

Submitted by orange_angel69@hotmail.com 6


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